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darkside


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i dont know if this a poem or what it is
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this is for all the people who find love i just wrote this on the spur of the moment so yeah 
and this is like really embaressing to say but i wrote it for my girlfriend
yep i said it now i feel better
p.s.  these are just my thoughts okay

can i hold you underneath the stars
and tell it all
will you hold me near
underneath the tree and sing me the song you use to sing
can i look into your eyes
and find all the emotions you try to hide
can you look and see right through me
of how i want all your hopes and dreams and in fact your whole being
will you let me hold your hand
and let me feel the warmth and love you seem to show
when you hold my hand to do you ignore the cold world the way i do
can i kiss you on the snowy hills
and show you how i feel when you are near
will you kiss me in the rain
and show me what love is all about
how when its you and me we show it
all and dont hold back the feeling of belong

soo yeah um here it is i wrote this my 9th grade year and finally finished it  so yeah this is to my girlfriend who i have been with for 2 or 3 years (i need to keep up with dates lol )

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darkside


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i need to edit that lol but it wont let me i wrote this for my gf that i have been dating a year not two sorry lol

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LadyTwilight


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Aww, I likes it~ *two and a third thumbs-up plus one half of a hug*

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darkside


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thanks im glad you like it

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Light_side


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awww i remeber this poem you worte it to me last month attacks Drakside thank you

-- Edited by Light_side at 22:38, 2008-01-28

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darkside


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lol i thought you got rid of it but i guess you do love me after all kidding lol

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