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Apple Bits Discussion


Okay, it turned out I was the one who made this. I made it for a reason: to share my thoughts and premise of the story. Take it or leave it, of course.

Basically, the story is about a foreign exchange student named Kristy. She's an anime otaku, pretty much, and she chose Rezusono Private High School because she thought the scenery was pretty. What she didn't know was the school's secret reputation. It's really revealed through its name. Rezosono: Lesbian Garden.

Lesbians from all over Japan flock to this all-girls school with one goal in mind: obtain a wife. No one knows why or when it happens, but now and then a pod crashes near the school. Alien females are inside. Always female. Whatsmore, they fall in love and pledge themselves to the first human female they meet.

The irony is that Kristy has never liked girls before. That means, she isn't a lesbian. At least, she doesn't consider herself to be one.

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**scratches head** probably should have read this before I posted ^.^; but oh well, the story's still early - if I went somewhere weird it could always be corrected. :D


(This is my first group story so be nice :P up until now I've always been a solo writer :\ )

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It's not a problem. Your post doesn't affect the premise at all, actually. In fact, it's about how they would react.

I imagine the pink-haired alien girl attending the school. There will be a few other alien girls at the school too, but they're meant to be rare. Maybe two or three other alien girls.

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I will probably lent my writing expertise a bit for some fun.

BUT I have SO read a 'female alien crashes on earth and awakens a girl's sexuality' plot before. If I am not mistaken it was one of shanejayell's earlier works...

But to nevermind, I'll add to it when inspiration hits.

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Who is Shanejayell?

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Leonharte, not to be rude, but I'm sure that your "expertise" is not necessarily required. if you don't like the plot that Nobody chose, feel free to make your own group story; you don't have to add to this one. or, if you'd prefer, there are official writing threads in the forum where you could post works of your own with plots that you don't feel are overused. I would just like to request that you keep in mind that after so many centuries of stories, music, and plays...there are not many plots that have never been touched on.


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That kinda made me feel like I was being accused of plagiarism or something... I honestly had no idea that something similar was used before.

Then again, as Raine said, it's almost inevitable, I suppose.

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No it's not plagiarism, sorry that you thought I was accusing you of that, but I just wanted to mention that the premise was similar to something I'd already read, that doesn't mean that the story will be anywhere near similar, and as you pointed out, anything nowadays is based on something else (hell, the Lion King was based on Hamlet).

And Shanejayell is a prolific fanfiction and fiction writer who focuses mainly on shoujoai. You can find him at either fanfiction.net or fictionpress.net under shanejayell.

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It seems like no one wants to add anything to this story. Oh well, I guess it's closed then.

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