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Short Poem


Here's a little free verse poem I cooked up it's simple and short.


I see you,
I always see you,
Everywhere I look,
I see your innocence in the faces of the children,
an Innocence I wiped away,
I see your kindness in their mothers,
A kindness I took for granted,
I see your wisdom in their grandmothers,
A wisdom I ignored,

When I told you I loved you.

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Very nice! ^^

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wow I wrote that? and over a year ago? cool!

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That's true. It's a nice poem. You should write a song. It would be good I think.

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a song huh? I haven't done that since I did those ones for Kio way back when...
sure I'll give it a shot who wants to help me come up with ideas? lol

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w00t writing songs is fun!!!

you could write it about the general concep of love ....... not between ppl just in general

seems like something you should be good at =)

or write a song about the forum ^^ eeeeeeeeeuh more will probably come to me .... just not right now.


ooh i know a song without any meaning exept that you have fun writing it that usually makes great and happy songs =D

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...at my school, we once had a group project of writing a song...my whole group were without any kind of inspiration, so it ended up being about a boy who was addicted to chocolate...it sucked... :(

...I did get 5 on a grade from 1 to 6, dunno why...confuse.gif



-- Edited by Susanah on Tuesday 14th of July 2009 07:28:19 PM

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If you look carefully to the lyrics of many songs, you will see that they are mostly not very cultural or intelligent.

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thats pretty true

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...the melody is harder to compose, tho...

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