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Post Info TOPIC: A new romance in the mist.
Did you like it and would u like to see more? [7 vote(s)]

I loved it! And i want to see more!
71.4%
I liked it alot but im not shure id like to see more.
0.0%
It was good but i wouldent liek to see more
0.0%
Its was ok.
14.3%
I dident liek it but i think u should make another to see if you could better your skills.
14.3%
I Diddent liek it and it should be berns and its ashs should be left in the ground!!!
0.0%


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A new romance in the mist.


Ok i just made this in the top of my head so im just testing my ideas on you guys to see if you liek them or not. And ill keep it farly tame xD. This is a Takki/Nikki romance (cuz i just see them togeather in this wecomic).

One moring in the middle of summer. Takki was up and dressed ready to go out. Last year she had many troubles but rather not speak of them agien. Takki was going out to watch a movie with nikki and her brother. And Takki is suprised that Nikki got Kai to go. This is where my story will begin.

Takki-I`ll call Nikki to see if kai`s willing to go.
*takki picks up the phone and calls Nikki*
Nikki-Yes this is nikki.
takki-Hay nikki, so is Kai gona go i know hes going to love this horror movie.
Nikki-Yea......i got him to go but theres a catch...
Takki-Ok, what`s that?
Nikki-he wants to go see *wispers a scarry name*
*takkis eyes widein*
Takki-that movie? this movie he wants to see is a shure 100% chance you`ll wet your pants.
Nikki-I know takki, But he wont go unless its this movie....So would u still want to go?
Takki-Well.....i guess it does look intresting.
Nikki-Yes it shure the reviews of it are high.....well the ones who havent needed to change there pants 3 times.
*takki laughs*
Takki-ok Nikki, i`ll go will Kai pick us up?
Nikki-yes he will were leaveing now
*takki and nikki hang up*
*takki shudders at the name and gets readdy for the trip*
*a short time later kai`s truck comes and nikki gets out*
Nikki-Hay takki are u ready?
Takki-you bet i am i brought the spair pants!
*niiki laughs*
*kai`s beeping like a insane man*
Takki/Nikki-OK KAI WERE COMEING!!
*they get in the car and kai drives off*
*kai parks and all 3 get out*
Takki-are u shure your readdy for this? its going to be intence.
Nikki-im shure well be fine. Anyway i got you to protect me.
Takki-What?
Nikki-Nothing!*blushs*
Takki-are you cold out your all red.
Nikki-n...no im fine.
Takki-Alright.
*they get the tickets and take there seats*
Takki-ok were here we 5 minuets befor it starts.
*time passes and the movie starts*
ARE YOU READY FOR SOME HORROR! *they glup* WELL WE GOT.....AHHHHH *chainsaw sound and blood goes alover the screen* AHHHHHHHHHH! *screams from the theater all around* BLOP....BLOP.....BLOP....BL---SWISH! *the head drops down and screams happing*
Kai-OH MY GOD YOU CALL THIS HORROR???
Nikki and takki and scared to death hugging each other like ones gona drift away*
*later in the movie*
Kai-hay u want anythign girls this is sarting to bore me.....
Takki/Nikki-YOU CANT LEAVE US THIS IS TO SCARY!!
Kai-This? *pish* this ant what u call scarey....now bareny god thats one odd dino.
*kai leaves and takki and nikki are still clinging to eachother*
Takki-Nikki....i....i cant belive i let you talked me into takeing me here.
Nikki-I know Takki.....im sorry.
Takki-Its ok at least your here with me.
*Nikki Blushs*
*Nikki Slowly kisses Takki`s Cheek*
Takki-Nikki....what are you....
Nikki-I....im sorry i got over carryed away i just like you and all that i wanted to try it.....
Takki-You like me?
Nikki-Y.....yes..and id like to be with you.
Takki-N....Nikki i...idont know what to say..
*Niiki leans in closer*
Nikki-Just let me try it.....
*takki leans in closer too*
*at the point there lips were 1 inch way....*
Kai-HOLY CRAP I KNOW ITS BORING WHAT ITS NOT THAT BORING!!!
*nikki and takki get up and relise the movies over*
*Nikki stands up and sighs*
*takki stands and hugs nikki and kisses her cheek*
Takki-come on lets head out of this nightmare i need to change my pants!








Well all thats it if you liked it i could make another story if you would want to but thats my story thank you for reading!



-- Edited by Loves_Crusader at 23:03, 2008-02-28

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Date: Jul 9, 2008

thats a good storyzizzle

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my name is devin =D im a guy  not a chick lol


Taiki Webcomic Artist

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Date: Aug 19, 2008

I wanna see what happens next! D:

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