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Post Info TOPIC: Taiki&Alex's First Kiss Sketch! Need Suggestions and Taiki's Insight!


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Date: Apr 16, 2008
Taiki&Alex's First Kiss Sketch! Need Suggestions and Taiki's Insight!


Oooook So I want to make a "The Moment" Drawing for when Taiki finally Kisses Alex~! I Wanna do a really good job and reflect what everyone wants it to be like in on picture (I will not make it Overly Complex or "Busy") I just made a 15 min. sketch (I didn't do too good lol and I made a scribble for land! lol) of the basics of the two of them. Soo Taiki get your butt here and talk to meh! Same goes to everyone so I can make an actually good picture! lol

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Date: Apr 16, 2008

as much as I'd hate to spoil my reputation as a do-nothing slacker I'll leave you a little feedback.
Firstly Nice job on the hair
their facial expressions seem a bit.. off but thats ok we'll run with it
thirdly I think they should be standing a bit closer together and possibly holding hands

(As much as I think both of them wearing dresses is out of character I don't mind the change)

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Thanks for the feedback~ This is a rough sketch so I didnt show the expressions as vividly as I would normally. But ya...maybe they should be a bit closer...Just a bit lol

-- Edited by Sumomo145 at 17:41, 2008-04-16

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Well i'd love to see it when it's done
Keep it up

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