People call me strange for some reason im not really sure why thougth. Might be because i constanly spy on people and shout huzzah alot. I dont really mind being called strange, i think strange is just another word for uniqe. Besides spying is fun! You can actually learn alot about people by following them around and listening in on all their conversations. For instance i was the one who found out that the school tacos were made out of dog food! However i didnt spread the story because the principal gave me $20 not to tell anyone. Also i was the one who found out that marco was bi-sexual! Yeah thats right! turns out he had a brief stint with micheal two years ago. But none of my previous work has never come close to what i just found out! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.......ha
(this is my first fanfic so be nice plz)
-- Edited by El-jasho on Tuesday 14th of April 2009 10:10:30 PM
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is there gonna be more ? seems like an introduction to something bigger. your wrighting style seems quite alright ^^ not sure i like the story yet since there isnt really one. =D but for now i like it ^^
-- Edited by gappiee on Wednesday 15th of April 2009 09:25:02 AM
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I agree with gappiee there, it does feel intro-y, but a pretty good intro it is! I hope there's more! If not, well, this story could be about ANYTHING (she could have found out that her PE teacher is actually a 2000 year old immortal who originally went by the name Xena and fought for the greater good with your English teacher! Wow...now THAT"S a thought.)
Anywho, whether it is or isn't finished, it's a pretty good first fic to me!
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wow a 2000 year old PE teacher i would think one would achieve more in 2000 years altough if youre immortal i guess it doest matter how long you take to get anywhere.
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