ooh i once considered writing a comic about two evil mages meeting while both trying to destroy a village of poor pesants and then ..... start cooperating after having a fight in the town square about who gets to destroy it
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yes there was.... i would be off topic if there wast wouldnt i...... but i couldnt think of a actual story line and im lazy so i never made any of it =)
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the main characters..... who else? although it would be a love/hate thing.... they would be a fire and lightning using elemental mage ... and a soulsucking negative energy using necromancer like mage ( without the undead undead are gross, i dislike undead)
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I once had a story planned about a supervillain. She was a psychic, and she could make people hear whatever she wanted to hear, and see what she wanted them to. She had a minion called Serena, who was kinda a demon girl thing, with weirdly proportioned arms and really sharp broken teeth and a hunch and stuff. They kept fighting this girl who was like a Supergirl type, really strong and tough and stuff. There was lots of subtext.
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....I also have written girl love texts before, but I don't have the files of them, given that they were fullday-test stories, written on the school pc's on my user that does not exist anymore, since I'm in a different system now (1-10th grade -> new system after those, I just went on to 11th...) I did start a yuri story with lots of "goodies" planned, although, i thought it was really bad with a weird plot (it included and insane asylum and DNA-morphing {although that's pretty usual in my stories}) always wanted to start a new one though, may post it if not too much worse than half bad
Yesyes you blackmail me, I will never post it. If you bargain however, I might be able to deal (got too many "kidnappings" (by friends, like; NOoooooo, don't go and such) =)
...what do you say about co-operating on a story? I'll post as far a I got, then you try to continue it? I have no talent in writing stories anymore, just beginnings, sorta...^^
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Saitha lay alone in bed, thinking. About school, friends, family, life in general. She wasnt content with her life anymore. She had been before, but that was before she entered class. The new girl whod moved from Australia back here to Norway, and ended up in just her class. The new girl was not mean or unpleasant to be around in any way, in fact she was really enjoyable to be with. There was just one problem: Saitha was afraid to talk with her. She had always been the shy girl whod kept to herself unless people came up to her for whatever reason, and this new girl, Saneirah, was all cool and outgoing and mostly everything Saitha wanted to be. Saneirah. The name didnt sound Australian, but her family could always be from somewhere else, she thought to herself. She needed to get to know this new girl, because ever since that green-eyed beauty entered the classroom and told them about herself, Saitha had been entranced. You have to talk to her, a voice in her head said, the voice sounding strangely like her best friend Marias. Maria had always been talkative and somewhat outgoing, and had many friends because of it. Saitha smiled thinking about how she and Maria had first met.
Saitha had been in the playground without her parents for the first time. She had headed straight towards the swings; they had always been her favourite. She had fallen off however, and without her parents or anyone else she knew there, there was no-one to comfort her. This strange brown-haired girl had come up to her asking if she was okay, and they had been friends ever since. Saitha had always felt more secure with her at that time only friend close, and was glad to end up in the same class as her. But, she thought, that isnt going to help me get to know Saneirah. I NEED to get to know her better, it just feels as if it would be right. Tomorrow Ill go talk to her.
New school. Even though Ive been here for a week now, it is still so new and fresh. No-one knows me here, but still they all hang around me as if I was a shiny new platform game. Sure being surrounded and kinda popular is fun, butthat wont last forever. None of the people hanging around me all day seem t understand me, theyre just there because Im the new girl, and whatevers new is always funhmm, I wonder who that girl in the back is. Seems to keep to herself and all, unless she is with that girl Maria, rarely others. And, the teacher said were going to switch places tomorrow, I wonder who theyll place next toperhaps that girl? I really hope so, she seems pretty decent, and I so badly want to get to know hershe seems as if shed understandthe girl underneath
That first lesson the next morning Saneirah didnt show up. Neither the second. Or in the third. The fourth lesson she finally showed up, hair and clothes covered in snow. First day of snow, Saitha thought, always the same slow traffic every year. She knew very well that Saneirah had to take the bus to school. She knew all those little things about her, but not the person behind it all. Honestly, she was terrified. They had switched places over the weekend, and Saitha was sat right next to Ms. new girl she so loved, and while she was really excited about this, it was scary. Well, at least I have an excuse to talk to her now, she thought to herself.
Hi, came the wondrous voice of Saitha.
...I think I planned something about Saneirah being very close to nature, and showing Saitha a different side of a big forest close to wherever this story is taking place, in a way that would lead them to be closer =)
-- Edited by Susanah on Sunday 19th of December 2010 08:41:56 AM
im kinda curious what age are the characters in the story? is that part with the swings a flashback? like a memory from when she was 8 years old or something, depending on how close the playground would be...
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I was kinda angry and came up with a fanfic, kinda * mature * stuff, Kate/Abby from NCIS. Granted, it may have come from me not being allowed to have an NCIS marathon this weekend, but tell me what you think of it:
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t was a warm day, and the forest bustled with life. Sunrays came down glimmering through the leaves of the majestic treetops, making the scenery shine in a beautiful emerald green. Kate laid leaning against the roots of a large tree. Abby wasnt sure which was more beautiful - her girlfriend or the absolutely stunning scenery around them. "Hey Abby, come down here with me," Kate spoke softly as she lightly pulled the girl down and kissed her.
As Abby's hands roamed her body, she felt a light tugging at her blouse. Kate stiffened. "You know, we cant do this. Well go to hell," she managed to say through her stuttering. "Sssh. Weve been over this. God loves all of us, ALL of us, no matter who we love or what we do. So long as we believe in God and Jesus, he will still have faith in us and forgive us, no matter what we do. Heck, he still loves murderers, why should he care about the gender of the one we love?" While speaking, Abby had snuggled in close to Kate, tracing light circles on her stomach. "Mmm, youre right, I guess. Why must you always be so smart?" "Because I'm a genius," Abby announced with a large smile. Slowly, Kate rolled over, climbing up over Abby and kissing her again, this time taking the initiative to the next step herself. She started unbuttoning Abby's black, lacy blouse revealing creamy white skin underneath.
Abby shuddered at the sensation of her girlfriends fingers moving south, lightly touching her chest and abdomen as she went, ridding herself of the barriers that covered the beautiful body of the one she so loved. Kate couldnt quite help her staring as the black-haired beauty lay there for her to see, no barriers of clothing covering her anymore. The latter guided her lover's hands to her own clothes and slowly pulled them of. There would be no rushing - they had all the time in the world.
Abby rolled them over on the side, kissing the brunette softly. As her hands moved across Kate's body, she whispered "Don't be afraid, Kate. And remember that God will love us no matter what." Kate was a bit afraid when her love moved her hands towards her hot centre, the place where no-one had been before except herself. "Sssh, its okay. You know I'll be gentle." Abby's voice reassured her and she kissed her, her tongue licking Abby's lower lip asking for permission to enter. It was granted, the black-haired beauty opening her mouth while dipping a finger into Kate's heat. The brunette gasped into her mouth at the sensation, tingles spreading to every part of her body, setting it aflame with passion and the wonderful sensations of her lover touching her. Not really knowing what to do, Kate went for Abby's breasts, stroking and fingering the nipples that were so hard it must have hurt. Abby moaned into Kate's mouth and pressed her chest against the loving hands stimulating them. She could feel Kate shaking before she gasped free of the other's mouth and screamed at the top of her lungs when Abby pushed a finger deep inside her. Abby found herself shuddering an awful lot as well, and moaned Kate's name as she came. Snuggled close, they just laid there enjoying the moment afterwards.
It was growing dark as Kate slowly rose from her resting place where she and Abby had spent their first intimate moment together. "We have to go home soon - mom and dad will get suspicious if I'm out another night with you without having it planned beforehand." "Then why not just tell them?" Abby rose and started to dress. "That wouldnt be too bad, would it?" Kate sighed. "If they find out about this, they will do all they can to separate us. I do not want that." They slowly started the walk back home where they would have to hide again. Abby's parents were happy for them, but Kates wouldn't be. Kate sighed, wishing her parents were like Abby's. But they weren't, and she was left to suffer for it.
GRRRAAAH, the different signs I've put in the text don't work!
....okay, now I've edited it, doing my best to correct the paraphrasing and stuff again.
-- Edited by Susanah on Monday 17th of January 2011 08:35:41 PM
-- Edited by Susanah on Monday 24th of January 2011 12:12:57 PM
My grammar is usually really good, but with all signs except for dots and commas disappearing, it seems pretty bad I know^^ didn't have any internet connection before now after I noticed it, and I am too lazy to fix it...
....heh, I AM known for doing that... or at least I was...I usually forgot dividing my texts into paragraphs, but I've gottens slightly better, tho^^ :)
We have a webcomic project on our hobby website (connection is just 1M so it's kinda slow) where the basic theme of certain comics is yuri. Some arcs are more subtle and some are just warmongering, but still. It's not yet at such a mature stage that we'd want to actually tell about it on all forums, but I could post a humble link here.
Notes:
it started as a parody of mecha stuff, so it's kinda shounen still.
there are several people drawing stuff even in individual strips and frames, proportions and stuff may be crazy.
skill levels, motivation etc vary a lot. expect a lot facepalm-level drawings especially in the first strips.
if you want to be updated about stuff, follow sticker_pohjan on twitter. his tweets tell when some comic is updated.
some characters are flat, we can't do too long arcs because there's also a need to get the plot forward. sorry!
All those things said if you're still interested, check http://pohjanmanga.com/stick/esf.shtml for stuff.