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Your original yuri?


Who here has ever entertained thoughts of mmaking their own yuri? Manga, literature, comics, it doesn't matter.

What medium was it going to be in, and what was the plot?

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ooh i once considered writing a comic about two evil mages meeting while both trying to destroy a village of poor pesants and then ..... start cooperating after having a fight in the town square about who gets to destroy it

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Why? Was there yuri?

There better be yuri.

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yes there was.... i would be off topic if there wast wouldnt i...... but i couldnt think of a actual story line and im lazy so i never made any of it =)

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Oh, you lazy little-

The world doesn't have enough yuri tht you can just sit around and not write more! Go on, get! Go draw some yuri!

How was there yuri? Who were the yuri...ers?

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the main characters..... who else? although it would be a love/hate thing.... they would be a fire and lightning using elemental mage ... and a soulsucking negative energy using necromancer like mage ( without the undead undead are gross, i dislike undead)

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Ooooh, nice plot.

I once had a story planned about a supervillain. She was a psychic, and she could make people hear whatever she wanted to hear, and see what she wanted them to. She had a minion called Serena, who was kinda a demon girl thing, with weirdly proportioned arms and really sharp broken teeth and a hunch and stuff. They kept fighting this girl who was like a Supergirl type, really strong and tough and stuff. There was lots of subtext.

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could be pretty cool =O

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I could write it up in the Cygan's Writing Projects thread, but I dunno. This one's not as cool as the others. Would anyone be interested?

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anyone besides me? hmm could be =/ but im not shure

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I'll wait for someone else to chime in, then.

!!! Flood trigger grrr...

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WANNAWANNAWANNA HEAR!!!

....I also have written girl love texts before, but I don't have the files of them, given that they were fullday-test stories, written on the school pc's on my user that does not exist anymore, since I'm in a different system now (1-10th grade -> new system after those, I just went on to 11th...)
I did start a yuri story with lots of "goodies" planned, although, i thought it was really bad with a weird plot (it included and insane asylum and DNA-morphing {although that's pretty usual in my stories})
always wanted to start a new one though, may post it if not too much worse than half bad

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oooh sci-fi sounds fun ^^

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I'll write it up eventually, then, if you write up yours ^_^

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aaaw thats blackmail..... or bargaining meh its the same

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I prefer blackmail ^_^

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Yesyes you blackmail me, I will never post it. If you bargain however, I might be able to deal (got too many "kidnappings" (by friends, like; NOoooooo, don't go and such) =)

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B-but I suck at bargaining!

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... just say it will be a trade of one story for another =D

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YEAH WHAT GAPPIEE SAID

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...what do you say about co-operating on a story? I'll post as far a I got, then you try to continue it? I have no talent in writing stories anymore, just beginnings, sorta...^^
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...I think I planned something about Saneirah being very close to nature, and showing Saitha a different side of a big forest close to wherever this story is taking place, in a way that would lead them to be closer =)



-- Edited by Susanah on Sunday 19th of December 2010 08:41:56 AM

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im kinda curious what age are the characters in the story? is that part with the swings a flashback? like a memory from when she was 8 years old or something, depending on how close the playground would be...

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the swingswould be a flashback from when Saitha was like 5, and the characters are teens, something under 18 but still like 15-16 or something

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aah ok =)

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I was kinda angry and came up with a fanfic, kinda * mature * stuff, Kate/Abby from NCIS. Granted, it may have come from me not being allowed to have an NCIS marathon this weekend, but tell me what you think of it:

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GRRRAAAH, the different signs I've put in the text don't work!

....okay, now I've edited it, doing my best to correct the paraphrasing and stuff again.

-- Edited by Susanah on Monday 17th of January 2011 08:35:41 PM

-- Edited by Susanah on Monday 24th of January 2011 12:12:57 PM

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Grammar and paragraphing.

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My grammar is usually really good, but with all signs except for dots and commas disappearing, it seems pretty bad I know^^ didn't have any internet connection before now after I noticed it, and I am too lazy to fix it...

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I can't even begin to offer a critique before you fix the grammar and paragraphing.

I need to be able to read it before I can seriously comment on it.

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it starts nice =D but then i got lost and clouldnt find where i was, there is a bit to much text packed into one place.

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....heh, I AM known for doing that... or at least I was...I usually forgot dividing my texts into paragraphs, but I've gottens slightly better, tho^^ :)

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maybe you could edit the text to make it easier to read and then re-upload? =D

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Bah.....erm, uhm....okay :) .....if I find time^^;

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alright!

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We have a webcomic project on our hobby website (connection is just 1M so it's kinda slow) where the basic theme of certain comics is yuri. Some arcs are more subtle and some are just warmongering, but still. It's not yet at such a mature stage that we'd want to actually tell about it on all forums, but I could post a humble link here.

Notes:

  • it started as a parody of mecha stuff, so it's kinda shounen still.
  • there are several people drawing stuff even in individual strips and frames, proportions and stuff may be crazy.
  • skill levels, motivation etc vary a lot. expect a lot facepalm-level drawings especially in the first strips.
  • if you want to be updated about stuff, follow sticker_pohjan on twitter. his tweets tell when some comic is updated.
  • some characters are flat, we can't do too long arcs because there's also a need to get the plot forward. sorry!

All those things said if you're still interested, check http://pohjanmanga.com/stick/esf.shtml for stuff.



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